Got an idea worth working for?
A case study.
CONTENTS (this page):
- 1. Does this problem sound familiar?
- 2. Have you ever been to a sales
- 3. Is this an idea worth working for?
- 4. But, will I lose this client?
- 5. Did we do what customers wanted?
- 6. It all began with that idea worth
As I've said before, businesses don't work by themselves;
people work. And the thing that makes people work is
an idea worth working for.
Here's how this principle worked for my client and
1. Does this problem sound familiar?
I arrive for my appointment with Carole, a product-marketing
specialist who works for their VP of Marketing. In the lobby, we have a brief meeting where she explains
"Our 800 number is ringing off the hook! We can't
handle all the customer's questions and complaints. We cover everything in our product manuals, but our
customers refuse to read them."
"Why won't they read them?" I ask.
"Our manuals were written by programmers and engineers.
Our customers are radiologists and physicians and
they refuse to read them!"
"Well, I'm sure I could..."
"Wait, there's more. We're designing our new 'flagship' ultrasound imaging
system, and we don't want to make the same mistakes again."
I say, "Good idea! It's always best to develop documentation
as you develop the system."
"I agree," said Carole. "Our last effort was a hasty,
last minute compromise - after we had already built the system. Now, we're paying the price. This time we're going
to do it right. Let's go meet Greg, my boss."
2. Have you ever been to a sales "shoot-out?"
We take the elevator to the second floor, where Carole
gives me a brief tour of the systems development area. She then escorts me to Greg's plush corner office
with its view of Silicon Valley and south to Los Gatos. Carol introduces
me to Greg, then tells him about our prior phone conversations and today's
After some cordial conversation, I ask Greg, "Can you tell me a little about your typical sales
"Why? I thought you were a technical writer."
"Actually, I've spent a few years in sales and I'm
well aware of the need for good documentation when selling. Maybe we can write the documentation to help you sell
more systems. I assume you'd be interested in that."
"Hmmm..." he said. I could tell he was skeptical.
"Well, OK. We take part in what we call
a 'vendor shoot-out.'
"Our shoot-out is the most important part of getting
the order - if we don't ace the shoot-out; we don't
get the sale.
"A shoot-out occurs when all competing vendors
bring their equipment to a specific room in a hospital or clinic. In the room, there will be a real (or pretend) patient.
We vendors then gather around the 'patient' to demonstrate our equipment
to physicians and radiologists."
"Brutal!" I exclaimed. "Exactly how does that work?"
"The vendor's technicians take turns showing the physicians and radiologists how their
system works with the patient..."
I interrupt with a question; "Do the physicians
and radiologists get to 'test drive' the system?"
"Oh, no! The systems are so complicated that we must use experienced computer technicians
"Are these technicians the same programmers or
engineers who developed the system?"
"Yes. Unfortunately, they must be there to handle the inevitable problems
"So, when do the physicians or radiologists get
to try the system?"
"They don't. No vendor is willing to take that risk because of
the possibility of a crash!"
3. Is this an idea worth working for?
I ask, "Suppose you wanted to buy a new car and the salesman would only let a mechanic
take you for a demonstration drive. Would you buy a car that you couldn't
drive your self?"
"No, but this is different. After they buy a system, the winning vendor will give
extensive training to the buyer's technicians who will run the equipment."
I respond, "OK, what if your new system were so
simple to use that physicians and radiologists could demonstrate it
to themselves? Would that be an advantage in selling?"
"Wow! Of course! But, I don't see how..."
"Let's not worry about how now, but let's set this as a goal: 'A system so simple
that even a doctor can use it!'"
"Wait," he said, "I'm not convinced you're the one
to do this job. Truthfully, we're looking for a radiologist who's
familiar with ultrasound technology, someone that has worked with doctors,
hospitals, and clinics.
"I feel that only a radiologist could write documentation for our exotic new system. We'll keep you in mind..."
4. But, will I lose this client?
I say, "I understand your concern. May I speak frankly?
"Carole mentioned that you have many radiologists
working here. Yet, your company delivers documentation that doesn't
serve your customers.
"Your 800# is ringing off the hook with needless questions
and complaints... You don't need a radiologist to write your documentation;
you need an expert high-tech writer.
"As I've told Carole, I have experience in biomedical
applications. Tell you what. Let me show you what I can
do in just two weeks. If you're not satisfied with what I produce, it
won't cost you a penny."
"But, but I don't see how..."
"Let me worry about how. Do we have a deal?"
I stand there silently waiting for his response. I'm thinking I've really blown it! I've insulted
his employee-radiologists and doctors in general.
I watch him agonize over his decision. I can't stand the silence, but I eep my mouth shut.
Carole smiles, but I'm sure she's wondering now...
...Finally, he says, "OK, I'll give you two weeks.
I guess we have nothing to lose."
5. Did we do what customers wanted?
I began interviewing designers, radiologists, and
a few of their customers. I discovered nothing "wrong" with the old system.
It did what it was designed to do.
But, intricate complexities required users to endure
extensive training. Plus, THE DOCUMENTATION HELPED ONLY EXPERTS!
Thus, customers were totally dependent on service engineers and expensive customer training.
To marketing, I promoted an idea:
The new system should be designed from the outside-in by USERS -- not
from the inside-out by engineers.
This was a switch. Formerly, they had to market whatever engineers created.
We immediately conducted brainstorming sessions
with customers and potential customers. We quickly discovered what USERS wanted, which had
a positive impact on design standards.
I was surprised when they decided to use the motto, "So simple that even a doctor can use it!"
Of course, we used our motto only in-house. But, it gave us all an
"idea worth working for."
Everyone knew that most doctors would seldom operate
the system because they employ radiologists to do that. All doctors
want is the data (images) for analysis.
However, we knew that doctors had strong buying influence... and if they could get a "hands-on" demo during the
"shoot-out," they would be more likely to buy it.
Plus, we found that doctors loved the fact that
we were thinking of them.
In 2 weeks, we developed tremendous inertia and
Over the next several months, we had frequent meetings with product designers and medical professionals.
We brainstormed ideas for the user interface, and how the documentation
might streamline user learning.
As I documented the system, I tried all the emerging features as a "dumb
user." Hence, I found many bugs and discovered ways to streamline and
simplify the user interface.
Sure, the programmers and engineers resisted changing
the hardware and software. Yes, we worked long hours.
Yes, the Configuration Control Board had to approve
the system and my documentation. And finally, everything
had to be FDA approved.
But, we met the delivery date with a system "so
simple that even a doctor can use it."
6. It all began with that idea worth working for.
For the new product rollout, I delivered the following
Spectra System Operator's Manual and Tutorial
for Physicians, Radiologists, and Medical Technicians.
Standard Biopsy Devices Operator's Manual
- Here's what Carole wrote after we released the new flagship system:
"Dear Mike, We were skeptical because you were
not a radiologist ... Thank you for all the effort and time ...
for being flexible in the times of the day (nights)
that we could work ... for thorough research, design, organization,
writing, layout, accuracy ... was impressed when the manual passed
our stringent Configuration Control Board without changes. Your
effectiveness as an individual was a major key to the success. Excellent!"
--C.N., Product Marketing Specialist, Diasonics,
Even more interesting, a sales rep (not known for reading manuals)
"Dear Mike, This is the best [Operator's] manual this company has brought out ... I actually read it!
... well laid out ... easy to find data quickly."
-- Sales Rep, Diasonics, Milpitas, CA.
(It's not bragging if it's true)!
Over the next few years, the company designed new features and accessories
for which I wrote manuals as needed.
7.0 MHz Multiplane Endovaginal Probe
6.5 MHz Convex Linear Array Endovaginal
7.0 MHz Convex Linear Array Endorectal
Spectra System Operator's Manual Addendum:
Cardiac / VCR / ECG Features
Cardiac Cross Reference Table.
Abdominal Clinical Applications Manual
It all began with an idea worth working for.
Businesses don't work by themselves; people work.
And the thing that makes people work is
AN IDEA WORTH WORKING FOR.
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